True Confessions

In Chapter 6, "Diction," Trimble talks about different aspects of writing. He breaks it down like so:

• conciseness
• vigorous verbs
• freshness

Definitely, I need to work the most on conciseness in my writing. I tend to think in circles, and I express myself better orally rather than writingly (that's probably not a word). This usually shows in my writing, and often I don't have the patience or attention span to edit properly. Soooo yeahh.